In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same as the old house style in local area.
It is said that people should make a decision on constructing their own houses as per their favorite models instead of choosing to build in traditional ways. Personally, while there are certain benefits of this tendency, I believe that the drawbacks overshadow its advantages.
On the one hand, the main benefit of comfortably choosing the design and construction of people’s houses is that they could apply a variety of styles, which can be obtained from all over the world to make their houses more unique and attractive. This could draw numerous attentions in their neighborhood by its extraordinary features. For instance, I have seen various kinds of houses in Vietnam, which are designed and decorated in different ways according to different countries such as France, Japan or China, and they look totally eye-catching.
However, alongside the benefit of this trend, I believe that the consequences could be detrimental. The main reason for this is due to the shortage of high-quality features, which are mainly used to construct free-style houses. This means that if they just want to fulfill their satisfaction by possessing free-style houses and ignore architectural warnings, they will be irresponsible to the materials as well as the safety procedures conducted for the construction. This could have an adverse effect not only on the structure itself but also on people’s lives because it could unexpectedly collapse.
In conclusion, while some people think that they should be free to choose the design of their houses because it benefits their convenience, I believe that this would put a threat on several aspects in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31060606061 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04043759839 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.598233188 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.2 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257204006627 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983368271481 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949499864419 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173518860419 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455400379502 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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