The Benefits of Raising a Child in the City.
When it comes down to choosing over city or countryside for children’s best interest in raising, the debate is on. In my opinion, the result can be simply derived by what type of man one is expecting the child to grow into.
Taking the standpoint from the Asian parent’s, I believe most parents would prefer city over countryside as their answer. There are conspicuous advantages in raising a child in a countryside including allowing the child to explore deeper the inspiring nature, to experience less pressure in peer competition, and to develop a simpler lifestyle comparing to the metropolitan. Yet, points above are not guaranteed to take place in the child.
On the other hand, raising the child in a city that is well populated, cultural blended, and fast-paced would definitely advance in developing a well-equipped and adaptive child.
First, children being competent is one of the advantages being cultivated in the city, owing to that all the citizens will have to motivate themselves in order to survive in such a populated environment where both the educational and job opportunities are relatively sparse comparing to the countryside.
Second, children in the city tend to learn to be more open-minded than the country dwellers. These lads are mean to develop a wider horizon based on the stimulation provided by the city's varied cultures and ethics.
In conclusion, comparing to the countryside, the city provides a more conclusive and beneficial outlook for the child’s personality and social development. Thus I believe that raising a child in the city should be a better alternative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 261.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25670498084 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14924816088 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4815783915 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.727272727 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215173763552 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803543500731 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785842392713 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104319800886 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740813923879 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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