Some parents think that advertisements are misleading for children, while advertisers claim that they provide knowledge. Give you opinion.
These days people won't know about new products if there aren’t any advertisements on TVs, social media or bill boards. Some people think that advertisements are confusing children and showing them things, which aren't excited in real, but advertisers believe that through their ads they are helping and providing knowledge to children.
On one hand, parents prefer not having more advertisements that mislead and attract children. First, most companies do their advertisements in a professional way, and exaggerate as much as they can to attract the customers even if the picture isn't as real. Second, toys ads show to children what tasks the item can do and what its advantage towards other toys, such way kids are encouraged to buy it. However, commercial is the major assistant for companies to sell their stuffs and raise their profits. For example, we can see on the road many advertisements, showing products which look great, but if we go to buy it, it isn't the same as the picture.
On the other hand, advertisers think that their job is to spread knowledge to the customers, not only to encourage them to buy. First, promoters think that showing the main details about their products will attract the viewer and increase his curiosity to have more information about how this product function. Second, commercial companies try to reach their idea to the customers, through the best advertisement to promote the product and encourage people to buy it. However, each advertise has its own way to advertise the items, and for them to have more details about it, will help the buyer to have high knowledge and information. For example, food companies’ ads show an image of their food, but if you order it, it look different since they use Photoshop application, to have a good looking image.
As a conclusion, parents think that promotions are confusing children, advertisers think the opposite and they are providing knowledge. In my opinion, I agree with the parent’s point of view, since many people try to buy an item online, when it is delivered it look contrary, that's why promotions must be more real and stop hesitating with children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03888888889 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83724675272 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.6788395528 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29081196323 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118076760191 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114070648467 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198622426155 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575633419042 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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