Your organising a family party and you want to invite a friend.
1 state the party is abt.
2 What the party plans are
3 Why it is important for him/her to come.
Dear Sim,
I hope you and your family are doing well. It has been almost five years since we meet last time. At first, I have been writing this letter to invite you for our new house warming party.
My father and me were thinking to buy our own house from last year. Yesterday evening, we final the deal and got the keys of new house.So, our whole family wanted to throw a party for our all near and dear to share our this amazing achievement.
The function is going to be at our new place on Second of July at 611 oakmeadow drive.In the morning, starting from a religious worship following by lunch. After that, a few games will be played separately for kids and adults with snacks will be served on the side. Later in the evening, a musical group will be their to entertain us. Eventually, the dinner will be supplied.
At this occassion, I want you to be the part of this family party. Yours presence is uttmost essential for me. Because you was always on my side in my down time. I can not wait to see you after a long period of time.
See you soon,
Pallvi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... the deal and got the keys of new house.So, our whole family wanted to throw a par...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...n Second of July at 611 oakmeadow drive.In the morning, starting from a religious ...
^^
Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s presence is uttmost essential for me. Because you was always on my side in my down ti...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 202, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... I can not wait to see you after a long period of time. See you soon, Pallvi
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32019704433 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16865172505 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4187097726 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6428571429 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135119114105 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458636147277 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443816089742 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832932109263 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426087466498 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.