Some people think that it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Some people reckon that teaching parenting skills to children at school level is the best way to make them a commendable parent. I completely agree with the statement and in my opinion, acquiring knowledge about child upbringing at an early age helps to provide a secure and healthy childhood to the coming generation. Moreover, rational thinking, co-operative nature and skilled education are also required to become a sterling parent.
To begin with, there are a plethora of benefits associated with the learning of parenting skills as part of secondary education. Firstly, the ethical values taught during the subject sessions make the students aware of social threats such as drugs, child trafficking, sexual harassment and child abuse, which will help them to protect their future child from these evils and will be able to provide them with a secure environment. To illustrate, considering the increased rate of crimes related to children, the government of Japan has made parenting classes mandatory in high schools, in order to generate awareness about social threats at an early age.
Secondly, the healthy upbringing of a child largely depends upon the food and diet, therefore, if the youngsters will get proper education about the importance of a healthy lifestyle during their course studies then they will assuredly be able to raise their child in a nutritive way.
There are ample of other skills that an individual needs to acquire to become a doting and responsible guardian. Primarily, with the advancement of modern culture, the coming generation has become independent and rational, therefore, to understand their demands parents need to develop the quality of broad-mindedness and co-operation. Next, another skill required to achieve the status of sterling mother or father is education. An educated parent can teach their juvenile the traditional and ethical values that bind them to their basic roots and also nourishes their overall personality.
In conclusion, to raise a child in an effective manner the knowledge about healthy diet and awareness about social threats is quintessential and it should be provided as a school curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37829912023 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89176921371 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557184750733 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2456895128 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.833333333 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157774856567 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653145456086 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438493794741 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898486945478 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427157650409 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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