All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position
The statement which author has made above is absolutely right!. parents play most important role in their children's life. From their birth to their marriage parents have an major role. children learn most of their daily habits from their parents , which is before they join their school. After Parent's teachers play important role in children's life once they join their school but we can't say that once the child joins school parents should not pay attention to their child's development this is what author says the parents should voluntreely dedicate their timr to their child's schooling, now a days there are many modern schools day schools where a child leaves in mornig and returns in early evening where he spends most of his time with his fellow mate and teachers
Firstly we have say that schools are not only place to learn or gain knowledge even parents have to pay attention to child's study. now a days even in India there are day schools from moring 7 am to 3pm or afternoon school which is from noon to 6pm where student donets his most of the time with is friends and teachers which is good allthough but parents should pay attention to his studies and look weather he is studying in a proper direction or is he confortable with the study envioronment and teaching and weather he is treated properly, all this factors afftet the education life of a students and parents are the only one who understands their child properly
now there are two types of children depending upon theri learing ability one who can remember by reading and one who can remember by wrting, these two are major classification which students and parents have to understand, and one of the method has to be adopted for optimum study. another point which is to be enlighted here is apart form students parents should also participate in school activities for exampple pta ( parents teacher association) this association is formed in almost every school, this helps even parents to understand where thier students stand and what kind of education their students are getting. this pta association will also help parents to how to train their child so that he or she can score well in examination
now coming to examinatio. No student is scholar and no student is dum, it depends upon his or herpreperation for examinationat the edn of ant examiantion there is a result day whew even parents are invinted to check their child's result and take pregress report from teachers. on this day teachers give some instruction to parents of where and in which subject herit child is lacking and what should be done to improve it. all this suggetion should be happlily be accepted and followed
at he end it can be conluded that all parents should voluntrely pareticipate in theri child's study so that he or she can exel in future as no other than parents can understd the child better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, well, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78585858586 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48523786096 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 236.637079592 60.3974514979 392% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.363636364 118.986275619 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.0 23.4991977007 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18741897565 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932658024845 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310980976073 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116549592004 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308188070291 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 14.1392134831 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.39 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.