Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Being happy is a good sign to make life easy to live in today's fast moving life style. Nowadays we have very less time over our office works, therefore our life are very stressful. Being happy is a sign of healthy life style. Sometime it could be problematic to being happy. There were lot of circumstances to make happiest of our life.
In some instance, we can say that our way of conducting with people, living style and many more helps to live healthy and happy life. Furthermore, to keep our child happy and to fulfil their dream make person's life cheerful. Our achievement and goal are true make us spirit to achieve our biggest goal in our life. In some case, dinner with our loved once and spend quality time with them make us happy.
I. Our professional life also effect our behaviour and mood. If some one have job but in that person's do not have interest on it so it can be very stressful and depressive life person live. On the other one , they have interest in their job or what ever they do it could be easy to do and do like a game, without any burden in their mind. Although, family circumstances also manner in person's life, lot of time it can be seen that if daily differences happened in any person's house their behaviour and way of conduct can be saw differently and unhappy.
In my view, mostly house environment people how to behave with each other, office environment, job interest are most likely view to affect in our happiness. To want to be happy all of the factors matter on our life.
To view above discussion, it can be deduce that there are lot of factors are affect in over life to change our happiness to stressful life. So always people have to maintain all the factors to become happy person in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
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Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46105919003 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36112275405 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473520249221 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2831405819 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2352941176 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183704227415 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856284629414 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680370462248 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130581213048 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594023953085 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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