Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial issue whether researches in science area should be controlled by government rather than other sectors. I partly agree with this idea, however there are some definite issues to consider which will be further discussed in this essay.
Several arguments in favor of putting the scientific researches under the government’s control can be identified, First and foremost, some of these researches’ contents might be harmful to our human kind. There are many concerns associated with scientific researches, such as a human’s right, environmental impacts, and safety in people’s living. For instance, genetic engineering research in human’s body to develop a perfect gene or protect some inherit diseases is related to the topic of unnatural and human’s right. Another point is that monopoly might spring up in the market from the development of some scientific researches. Since there is a chance that the firm who innovates the products and ideas that could be a solution for country’s development registers their products for patent limiting only themselves to develop this product in further, others can not use this knowledge in their products. A further effect of this would be the country’s economic progress could slower than it should be.
On the other hand, limitation of development in scientific research in private sectors could lead to various negative effects. First, the accessibility to these researches and the right to explore any interesting topics could be a foundation for development in any fields. Seeing that if there is no prohibition in research in any scientific areas, there will be more development from an individual level resulting in the nation’s development. What is more, it is a basic right of company to implement in what they are interested as long as it complies to the law. If the researches in science are under control, it could be an obstacle to have new findings for their product’s development.
In conclusion, the world rapid change in this recent years has been driven from the advancement in knowledge from people’s found. Thus, in my opinion, I support the ideas of a freedom in study and research in anything which could be used in development in some ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33977900552 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19398663495 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5823083994 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.866666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20715439614 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843540634002 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793206136525 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138957280502 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665479970026 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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