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People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Staying healthy is our innate right. Since very ancient time, people have been trying to develop techniques and procedures for staying healthy. Being healthy should be our first and foremost priority. In the morning, I do a meditation and yoga, followed by enjoying healthy food in the noon and jogging and exercise in the evening.
First of all, I do meditation in the morning. I adapt the technique of, Pranayam. In this technique we inhale a long breath and hold it for a moment than exhales. By doing this we allow oxygen to distribute thoroughly, in our mind and body. This technique of medit...
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Sentence: These exercises keeps my body in proper shape.
Description: The fragment exercises keeps my is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace keeps with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: In summery, I use meditation in morning, proper healthy lunch in the noon along with Jogging and exercise in the evening.
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Avg. Sentence Length: 14 21.0 (need more compound or complex sentences)
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No. of Words: 308 350
No. of Characters: 1383 1500
No. of Different Words: 155 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.189 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.49 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 6.551 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.535 0.50
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