People living in big cities face many problems today. What are the problems? Should the government encourage people to live in regional towns
It is argued that living in metropolitan cities has been receiving a great deal of attention around the world due to its substantial impacts on human’s life. Various causes of this phenomenon should be identified by both the government and individuals before any actual solutions such as encouraging city dwellers to live in the outskirts are considered.
There are some issues of living in urban areas relating to population and environment. Overpopulation is indeed the driving force behind the housing problem. This issue leads to the fact that poor city dwellers have to live in slums in many cities in the world such as New York, Dubai, and Mumbai, which are metropolises facing this issue. Moreover, due to a high volume of vehicles in these regions, a massive quantity of pollutants such as CO2 is constantly emitting to the atmosphere. These pollutants accelerate the degradation of air quality, which is closely associated with various types of fatal disease such as lung cancer.
Authorities, therefore, should encourage those who settle in these places to move to suburban areas. This action not only helps reduce issues as mentioned above but also increase the chance of employment in outskirts. It is essential to distribute citizens to rural areas as a way of making the job market in inner-cities less competitive, which means there are more jobs for job seekers who struggle with unemployment in central cities to make a living in rural areas. A good example of this implement is Australia; the government succeed in implementing a decentralization program when Sydney faced traffic congestion and pollution problems. This program gave companies incentives to set up in country towns and created many job opportunities for its citizens.
In conclusion, an overly dense population in big cities undeniably causes a lot of issues, including housing and pollution problems. Governments should support the movement of people to smaller towns or suburban areas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29113924051 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01617309055 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1456124688 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260055969329 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762871022677 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599180447736 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148217514782 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276772599564 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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