Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of traveling to a work place every day.
Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?
700 is not only the victims of terror in Europe for 45 years but also the died people in Viet Nam 1 month because of traffic accidents. As a result, many crucial pile-ups were the origin of congestion. The fatal social evil of back up is metamorphosed into an unabated complication due to the overpopulation and can be curtail by the letter of law.
An inevitable truth dictates tail-back is a real and immenant menace. citizens are spending more time moving around. A recent study claimed that 70% people who live in metropolis use 3 hour per day to travel and a multitude of nation stacked in sponsorship for mishap crashes and tax.
The culprit for this inadequacy is the different between the quality standard from the countryside to the city. people subsist in rural area are now going to town for better working condition and modern technological devices. In addition, the standard in cities are high, lead to the overcharged of private vehicles, to wit; motorbikes, cars,...
No tedious analysis are required to learn that the human sonority takes an important role to this complication. citizens should enforce the law and the full weight of principle could be given by executive and legislative branch to punished wrongdoers. Besides, encouraging people to transfer by public transports is an extensive remedies to mitigate vehicles on the streets, while parliament can give transportation a high on the agenda.
Subsequently, weighning all the aforementioned, it now be clearly stated that traffic jam is an unprecedented inadequacy which poses environmental degradation and need to addvest the soonest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Citizens
...ail-back is a real and immenant menace. citizens are spending more time moving around. A...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...70% people who live in metropolis use 3 hour per day to travel and a multitude of na...
^^^^
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ndard from the countryside to the city. people subsist in rural area are now going to ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ivate vehicles, to wit; motorbikes, cars,... No tedious analysis are required...
^^
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e vehicles, to wit; motorbikes, cars,... No tedious analysis are required to lear...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Citizens
...an important role to this complication. citizens should enforce the law and the full wei...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'remedy'?
Suggestion: remedy
...er by public transports is an extensive remedies to mitigate vehicles on the streets, wh...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...eighning all the aforementioned, it now be clearly stated that traffic jam is an u...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, while, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1825095057 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07826086885 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673003802281 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9182517277 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0685423805533 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0199153160855 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292594672343 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0332783094583 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301660641545 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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