A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit.
You need to write at least 150 words.
Begin your letter with
Dear...
Dear Param,
Hope all is well with you!
I am writing to thank you for your invitation. Though I am dying to come and meet you, but unfortunately it won’t be possible as there are some tasks that I have to complete within that period.
Let me explain in a little more detail. As I told you last time, I’ve recently moved to a new role within my company and the work load in this function is quite high. This is majorly because we have to interact with the sales team on a daily basis and anything which impacts their numbers has to be attended to immediately. Moreover, we are facing staff crunch as a couple of my peers had resigned and left last week. Therefore, during the couple of days we have off in the next week, I am planning to complete the pending activities which are extremely important and urgent.
Alternatively, could you let me know if you are free in the Christmas holidays next month? An employee is going to join our team before that, and I am really hopeful that things will be under control by then! I’d also like to see your son, I suppose he would be 3 years old by now?
Please let me know!
Your friend,
Atul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 469, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'offed'.
Suggestion: offed
...fore, during the couple of days we have off in the next week, I am planning to comp...
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Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lease let me know! Your friend, Atul
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, well, as to, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44186046512 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41974034159 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66511627907 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3741835376 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212511188038 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868822218522 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972507909211 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137358139653 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737598548711 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.