Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music is considered as a piece of an art. Few individuals think that it is a significant way to bring people of other cultures and ages together. In my opinion, I disagree and consider that music plays no role in that because of the personal choices and native music tones.
One of the major reasons why music is not a good way to bring people of different regions and age groups closer is because of their own choices. In other words, youngsters and elders have different taste of music, which sometimes results into separation between them. As most of the teenagers for example, like rock music in recent times which is considered as quite loud for old age people. Consequently it makes older to leave those places where such kind of music is being played. Thus, it is clear that music does not bring people of different ages at a one place.
Another important point which shows how music apart individuals of different culture is its composition in the native tone. As such music portrays a specific culture so it only captivates the attention of locals only. If such music is played in other countries, it will have no meaning for those people, ultimately they find it uninteresting. While studying abroad for instance, once I played my favorite music from my country in a party, as a result it was disliked by all my German friends.
In conclusion, because of the different taste in the music and composition of music in native tones, I consider that music is not a good way to bring individuals of different cultures and age groups closer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71691176471 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61351034254 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518382352941 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4440805949 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287992748058 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116802142651 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948834088793 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208366481597 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726213792827 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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