Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news,
while others believe that the more effective method is through other types of
media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people are changing the way they receive information through the use of modern
media. Meanwhile, traditionalists still maintain that the newspaper is the best method to
receive news. In my opinion, I believe it is time for people to acknowledge the values that
technologies is bringing to humankind.
Admittedly, there are reasons why people are still rooting for the newspaper. Firstly, a
newspaper would contain fewer distractions than other sources of information, such as
smartphones or tablets. As a result, the focus of readers will solely be on the piece of
news, enhancing their understanding and saving time. Secondly, having the newspaper
delivered to your doorstep is also a way to ensure that you are updated about what is
happening daily. This passive way of receiving information will create a habit of reading for
news, rather than actively searching for news in media like TVs or smartphones, which is
something we usually end up not doing.
However, I still think that other medias are delivering information in a more efficient way
than newspapers does. With the advancement of technology, it is not a rare sight to see
young people reading from their smartphones. Many people have chosen to follow
multiple newspapers on social media, expanding their scope of interest and customizing
the type of information they want to receive. Receiving news from TVs is also good, as
most public places nowadays have TVs attached on their walls with channels switched to
news broadcast or informative documentaries all the time. This proves to be a more
efficient way for people from all ages to catch up with the news.
In conclusion, although learning about news via newspaper is still an alternative, I believe
in this hectic society, people will find that receiving information through other media is
more convenient.
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| 2019-07-02 | cuduchieu18082002 | 67 | view |
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ving information through other media is more convenient.
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Line 22, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... information through other media is more convenient.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27090301003 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92973534292 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7570402499 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 131.0 5.01903807615 2610% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268153141247 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957645523316 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637684358123 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719109243776 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560719370271 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.