Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people tend to think that hobbies should be challenging to be enjoyable. Nowadays, there are several spices of hobbies around them. For many people especially adults, computer games is so popular and they spend several times to play games. In this essay, I will discuss this topic.
It is certainly obvious, there are many people that enjoy to do sophisticate, challenging and hard hobbies such as mountain climbing or scuba diving. However, people are different together in all over the world and they have different cultures and interests. A recent study published by Stanford University illustrate more than 72 percent of people believe that challenging hobbies are more attractive. Hence, these kinds of hobbies are so delightful and people get extraordinary exited to challenge 2 or 3 hours a day.
Turning to the other side of the argument, some people prefer to do calm, not challenging and peaceful works such as reading books in their free time. These people want to gain something that useful for their life and try learn them from the books. There are many people who prefer to collect unique things. For instance, people who collect stamps, coins or cars, while others prefer to walk to maintain their health. Therefore, people have different idea and hobbies and the levels of difficulty are different among people and these hobbies lead to people enjoy their life.
All in all, in spite of sophisticated hobbies are enjoyable for many people, there are many people who enjoy to do peaceful works and we should respect to all these ideas and interests. Personally, I prefer to do challenging work. I am a web developer and I always have challenge in my work. From my point of view, challenging work make me fresh and motivate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy doing'.
Suggestion: enjoy doing
...nly obvious, there are many people that enjoy to do sophisticate, challenging and hard hobb...
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Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy doing'.
Suggestion: enjoy doing
... many people, there are many people who enjoy to do peaceful works and we should respect to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60190520299 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534013605442 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6312749696 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6470588235 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203109333691 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718346857751 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853274330017 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133191369679 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552161023334 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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