Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Leisure time has been important in people’s life. As our world goes very fast and evolve quickly, leisure time helps us to slow down our pace and improve our quality of life. Most people seem to use leisure time to reduce the stress by doing hobbies or relaxing. On the contrary, other people even say that people should spend their free time developing their abilities. Although both are good opinions, I would like to say that people should take a rest on their leisure time.
First, taking a rest on their free time would be more efficient on their life. Some people can say that it is wasting their precious time if they don’t do anything except relaxing. However, resting can give people a chance to recharge their mind and to prevent distracting from their work. People can lie down their sofa, watching TV, or listen to their favorite songs. By doing these activities, people can relieve their stresses, in turn, this will result in focusing more on their work and better results and performances.
The second reason is that people can be more creative from taking a rest. When people do nothing, they feel free and have more time to think a lot and do medication. People can think about their work, their life, or the people they met. Whatever they are, the time can lead them to extend their imagination or deep into the problems they encountered on the work. Therefore, after resting, they can come up with new ideas or creative solutions for the problems.
Therefore, I believe that people should relax on their free time rather than doing activities for their mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or creative solutions for the problems. Therefore, I believe that people should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77173913043 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31780717462 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547101449275 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1879844913 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3125 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317138633123 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138152705783 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875400874365 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221924027615 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077223098572 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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