Referring the main points in the lecture, summarize the professor's view on effective discipline and contrast them with the option that parent ten to use.
According to the lecture there are 3 ways for the discipline for the children. Power, withhloding affection and the last one is the managment stratgy. The professor explain his view on these stragies.
According to the reading passage the the using of the power or punishment policy causes the more severe changes in the children. like they become more aggresive, hostile or hate the parent. However,according to the sciencetic without punishment discipline is not effctive as it is mention in the lecture. Professoe said that punishment is also necessary in some situation.
Secondly, the reading passage mention that ,withholding the affection that means no communication with children causes insecurity , nervousness and the depedent up on another. Althought withholding affection is cause the severe damage of children still professor aggre to apply withholding affection to the chlidren because some children naughty in nature. So this stratgy good for those type of children.
Lastly the management stratgy is very good for children which contain the set of rules clearly express according to the age. This coantin the comabination of the parise and the explanation and reasoning. Reagrdless of all of these stratgies parent most have to maintain the consistency in the discipline so that the chlidgre can understand the relation btween the rules ,their behaviour and the consequences.
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Sentence: According to the reading passage the the using of the power or punishment policy causes the more severe changes in the children. like they become more aggresive, hostile or hate the parent.
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Sentence: Secondly, the reading passage mention that ,withholding the affection that means no communication with children causes insecurity , nervousness and the depedent up on another.
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Sentence: Althought withholding affection is cause the severe damage of children still professor aggre to apply withholding affection to the chlidren because some children naughty in nature.
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Sentence: Reagrdless of all of these stratgies parent most have to maintain the consistency in the discipline so that the chlidgre can understand the relation btween the rules ,their behaviour and the consequences.
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Sentence: Power, withhloding affection and the last one is the managment stratgy.
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Sentence: According to the reading passage the the using of the power or punishment policy causes the more severe changes in the children. like they become more aggresive, hostile or hate the parent.
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Sentence: Althought withholding affection is cause the severe damage of children still professor aggre to apply withholding affection to the chlidren because some children naughty in nature.
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Sentence: So this stratgy good for those type of children.
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Sentence: Lastly the management stratgy is very good for children which contain the set of rules clearly express according to the age.
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Sentence: Reagrdless of all of these stratgies parent most have to maintain the consistency in the discipline so that the chlidgre can understand the relation btween the rules ,their behaviour and the consequences.
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