Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives
person an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree
or disagree?
Many people think that rich people have the responsibility to help out those that are
underprivileged. However, I think that help should not only be in monetary terms.
Firstly, people who are more fortunate in their lives should give back to the community .
However, rich people should not help out the poor by providing them with money. This is
because the money given to the poor can be seen as being given “out of pity”, thus
straining the relationship between the different social classes. Secondly, giving out money
will not be sufficient to help the poor escape poverty. The constant source of financial
assistance will only make the poor rely on the rich to survive without generating their own
incomes.
Secondly, I agree that rich people can give out to the community in terms of providing
opportunities for the poor to overcome their obstacles. Poverty often stems from a lack of
formal education and/or preparations for career paths. Formal education can help the
underprivileged acquire official certifications needed for job-seeking. Also, attending
vocational schools allows the poor to learn necessary skills required to get a job. This is
why the rich can help in the sense of funding for the poor's formal or vocational
education.
In conclusion, I think that people who are more fortunate in their lives should take care of
the unfortunate. However, help should be given not in monetary terms, but rather in
providing them the opportunities to work and earn their own money.
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Language errors: 117.0 5.01903807615 2331% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161153569708 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687719645401 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502795501918 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607868798118 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490752062141 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.