Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">One of the most striking trends in the today's world is the colossal upsurge that the number of people believe that magazine and newspaper give private information about the people. There is a widespread worry that, this will lead myriad concerns about one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this, i will discuss why in the given essay.
There are number of arguments in the favour of stance. But the most important is many magazines and newspaper features stories about the private live of famous people. Media is very useful tool for the society, which gives the information about the various incidents in the world. But in global world many newspaers and journalists feature the persnal lives of the famous celebrities, they just do for attaining the intention of the people as well as earn handsome money. Most of the magazines publish what the celebrities eat, from where they buy clothes and who they, they just publish for increse thier sale.
On the other hand. Everyone have a right to do whatever they like. There is very strict rules in the nation, if someone publish someone's private life into the magazines. It is just a agenda to increse thier sales. But there are many celebrities, who gives thier persnal information to the journalists to publish just for the fame.
In the view of arguments one can conclude that, the benifits of feature stories about the private lives of famous people is indeed to great to ignore.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...t, this will lead myriad concerns about ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
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Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...However, I do not entirely accept this, i will discuss why in the given essay. T...
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Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...alists feature the persnal lives of the famous celebrities, they just do for attaining the intenti...
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Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies eat, from where they buy clothes and who they, they just publish for increse ...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...hier sale. On the other hand. Everyone have a right to do whatever they like. There...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'publishes'.
Suggestion: publishes
... strict rules in the nation, if someone publish someones private life into the magazine...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ate life into the magazines. It is just a agenda to increse thier sales. But ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01204819277 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88533465059 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526104417671 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.4759294943 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1428571429 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0746652140796 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273457339553 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029646991803 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459194920067 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185356808723 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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