Do you agree or disagree?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
In the modern world, it is crystal clear that many factors have dramatically revolutionized human’s being life, especially after the industrial revolution. In this regard, there are many events occur in different location of the world every day. Some people believe that it is important to understand all of these events, while others do not believe so. As far as I am concerned, it will be better if people know about events and news that take place in the world. In the following paragraph, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
First, in the modern era, one of the most important ways for improving quality of decision making in the life is gaining a lot of experience about people in all of the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect their life. To put in other words, a human being with enhancing information about different aspects of life can improve the novel idea about making a better decision. For example, I remember when I was a university student at one of the best university in my country, University of Tehran, I wanted to select my professional field of my major. Therefore, I have done a lot of research about a novel idea and new challenges in mechanical engineering in the entire world. After a while, I could get the best novel idea about improving safety in a crash. Now, I am one of the most famous engineers, which help human safety in the world. In fact, if I had not known the important problems among the people life, I would not be able to improve human's life.
Second, today's, news and social network play a big role in the familiarity of culture, political orientation, and tradition in all of the world. In this regard, having a lot of information and knowledge about other countries can enhance communication between all of the people in the world. For instance, once when I was a student I wanted to travel to Italy. Therefore, I decided to read a lot of news and website about Italian people and their cultures to update my data. By doing so, when I arrived at the capital of Italy, Rome, I have found one of the best friends from Italy. As a result, if I had not known about Italian people, I would not be able to improve my communication.
In conclusion, apart from what was mentioned above, there are several reasons that subscribe for which it is better for people to have a lot of information around the world. Thus, this is my deeply held belief in knowing the events not only improve the performance of decision but also can enhance the quality of communication between the humans in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ing a lot of experience about people in all of the world, even if it is unlikely that they...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...political orientation, and tradition in all of the world. In this regard, having a lot of ...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...tries can enhance communication between all of the people in the world. For instance, once...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6135371179 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69249033512 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447598253275 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8345252154 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.65 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222456742667 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671712197081 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615284074723 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135502259827 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525387489409 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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