You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to inform the editor about it.
- What is the article about?
- What is article's error?
-what you expect the editor to do?
Dear Mrs. Hunt
I am just writing to inform you that a piece of information mentioned in your recent article in New York Times is incorrect. Consequently, I suppose that I should let you know, so you may make an appropriate amendment.
The article was titled “The extreme story of a murder” that was published last Sunday. Obviously, its content is about the story of a murderer who kill 3 people in the Jacob’s family.
I have known Jacob since we were studying at the same primary school, so I know almost everything about him and his family. Certainly, his mother was a teacher at our high school when the murder occurred. However, you wrote that she was an insane unemployment female before the incident. Hence, it may hurt my friend’s feeling one more time.
I oppose that this story is really sensitive because it was a tragic event. As a result, any inaccuracy in information may harm the victim seriously. This is reason why I am requesting you to correct it to make sure Jacob does not feel uncomfortable anymore.
I am looking forward to hearing the positive response from you soon.
Your sincerely.
Nam Vu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, look, may, really, so, i suppose, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82233502538 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85148189661 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680203045685 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4056442562 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231078348118 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616796622382 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707311236018 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12590291666 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927427623753 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.