Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
Sharing something to other is the superb thing to do. Some people give their money to homeless because they look poor and so pity. In my perspective, I disagree with it and I would like to explain why in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, giving money to homeless is mean that you support the mafia who set this scene and behind all of these fake beggars. In my country, homelesses are going to support by our government, they would be given some simple jobs like clean the road or fire fighter supporter or other charities activities in their places. However, the beggars on the street are not the true destitute people, but they are set to be poor and asking for some money from people who pass by. In fact, the influential mafia is behind this issues. Last year, the police caught one of the gangsters and he claimed that they would kidnap some kids and force them to be the beggars, and eventually, the money they have got go to the mafia. Therefore, one way of supporting the mafia is to give the money to the beggars who are on the street.
Indeed, the homeless on the street is also one of the most criminal crime like raping which is the most unforgivable issues. Recently, our police show us that most of raping cases in our country are stemmed from the beggars on the street. That's sound terrible to hear that some people give them moneys to support rapers. Hence, reducing the miserable issues the money should not be use in this way.
So where our money should spend to? The best idea of sharing somethings to other people is donation. There are many donations which are need and wait us to support them. For example, the elderly center need some moneys to buy their medical tools for old people or the orphan center need us to subsidize them in children's meal.
To put in briefly, supporting the homeless who live on the street is not a good idea. Because they could lead us to many unhappy problems. It's better to use our money to the verified donation center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...n fact, the influential mafia is behind this issues. Last year, the police caught on...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...stemmed from the beggars on the street. Thats sound terrible to hear that some people...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... live on the street is not a good idea. Because they could lead us to many unhappy prob...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in brief, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53739612188 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27002183534 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493074792244 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1356566364 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.05 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260356211922 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082163537073 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595420297013 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146728580331 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501807030635 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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