When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that the most significant factor impacting people when they decide a job is payment. I totally disagree with the position for the following reasons.
Salary plays an important role in paying human essential demand such as: housing, food and tranfer fees. And, sometimes, achieving a job with high salary is a aspect to show superior ability of a person to others. However, if people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered, they maybe face stressful jobs and find difficult to maintain motivation. For instance, a number of people choose well – paying jobs but then they have to quit because they fail to handle the hectic schedule.
On the other hand, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs such as passion and workplace atmosphere. When an individual work for their true career interests, they find motivation to overcome difficulties which will make people work more productive, thereby advancing their careers and having rewarding payment. If employees are happy at what they are doing then they will want to come to work each day. On the other hand, those who do not enjoy their jobs dread each long working day and eventually become miserable. Beside, atmosphere at workplace is also a remarkable factor, having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life.
Overall, when looking for a career, salary should be considered, but it should not overshadow other considerations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...es, achieving a job with high salary is a aspect to show superior ability of a pe...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ability of a person to others. However, if people choose their jobs based on the...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r careers and having rewarding payment. If employees are happy at what they are do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05019305019 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75015161035 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1798564148 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214615792863 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782247185573 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403397002504 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125897046291 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375226163706 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.