Does video communication with doctor help patients to cure any disease .pros and cons?
Surely, there has been no time in history where the live of people have changed dramatically .A quick reflection on typical day reveals video communication has been the once of prominent topic in the contemporary discussion .People have always held some conflicting views on this. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
Firstly, consulting a doctor through video communication makes easier for patients. People have to makes appointments and go to channel centers or hospitals and they meet a doctor. In sometime doctor get late and people have wait long hours and they waste their precious time and money. Therefore, Information technology has created a community friendly platform.
On the other hand side, Online consulting a doctor’s opportunities to diagnose a patient Although medical reported can be checked online doctor cannot see the real condition to the patient. Last but not least Internet facilities are not available in rural areas.
In view of the argument outlined one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of so many benefits of video communication one needed to great to ignore
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| 2019-07-08 | English time | 55 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 180.0 242.827586207 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32222222222 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90221286369 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688888888889 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5897554908 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.444444444 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148546508881 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536408517595 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528189915739 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813824095719 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278605708975 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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