Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Last few days, the issue of global warming is becoming more discussed. It is obvious because this problem can cause terrible consequences such as sea level rise and subsequent flooding of large areas. There are 2 opposite points of view. Some believe government must solve this problem while others think everyone can influence it and so individuals must do everything to prevent troubles. Who is right?
People, who believe that individuals should contribute to preservation of nature, see several ways to reduce CO2 emissions, which are one of the factors causing world temperature increase. First of all, people should use personal vehicles less, because they emit exhaust fumes and carbon dioxide. Instead of it, they can switch to public transport like buses, trains, trams and so on. Also bicycle is a good alternative to cars, it not only does not pollute air but also improves driver's health. Also, everyone can start use green technologies such as renewable energy. There are a lot of different kinds of alternative energy sources. For example, wind turbine, solar panels and biofuel are some of them.
But there is another opinion. Some consider that only government can affect this ecology problem greatly, According to statistics, transport emits much less emissions than industry and electricity production. As rule, large enterprises are engaged in production and ordinary people are not to able to change politics of it. Only authorities can influence it. For instance, they can reduce emissions thanks to carbon dioxide tax which obliges industrial companies to pay for CO2 emissions. As well, alternative energy is not common and very expensive, but government can change it by investing in new technologies development.
In my personal opinion, government has a greater opportunity to reduce carbon dioxide emissions than individuals. But it does not mean that ordinary people can do nothing to solve this problem. Just the opposite, they also should do everything to save our world. Thereby, it can be said that only together we can solve all problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...rt like buses, trains, trams and so on. Also bicycle is a good alternative to cars, ...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun emissions is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ing to statistics, transport emits much less emissions than industry and electricity...
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Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
...nment can change it by investing in new technologies development. In my personal opinion,...
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Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... new technologies development. In my personal opinion, government has a greater opportunity t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26807228916 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76550479404 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593373493976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8896673582 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95454545455 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143601563995 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364283583174 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492730827517 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893696095929 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446630726641 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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