Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What problems does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?
People especially youngsters are moving toward cities and towns, leaving their countryside searching for their future and jobs, to continue or begin their lives. Leaving countryside will cause several problems, but we can find solutions to stop this migration toward cities.
Young people are leaving the countryside searching for jobs, without knowing what problems they might cause. Social life will change and stop, young blood will disappear, and streets will turn as a ghost place, empty and sad. Some studies showed that this migration that this migration will impact on the economy of the countryside, shops, small businesses will close, people can’t make enough money to satisfy their needs. However, increase in rate of ages, will effect on development and improvement of the countryside. For example, the Ministry of Economy in Lebanon, after deep studies showed that the number of young people moving to cities exceed the 40% and causing a serious issue in the balance of economic growth.
On the other hand, solutions must be provided by the governments and local people. The governments should work on building new roads infrastructure, to facilitate the transportation and connection between the cities and country sides, where people can move easily. People should invest in their lands, move firms and companies toward the country, which will open the opportunity of new jobs and ideas that help to develop and change the area. Moreover, the governments with the assistant of local people, needs to improve the sector of tourist, to attract people to visit these places and encourage young people to stay to help and revitalize tourist traffic and economy. For example, at my region, the council with the help of the local people, both worked to bring investments to our country side, which encouraged us to stay and work here, to improve and grow our place.
Finally, leaving the countryside is causing several problems, but several solutions can be found, and solve this issue for a better way of living. That’s why, people and governments must unit together and work to fix these obstacles, to encourage and inspire young people to stay and live in their regions.
- Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 67
- Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- Nowadays most green energy is becoming evermore prevalent in both developed and developing countries Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment others believe they are a serious threat to energy security Discuss both views and 78
- Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with a friend. He have just sent you some photos of your holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter- thank them for the photos and for the holiday- explain why you didn't write earlier 73
- Some people think money spent in developing technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...However, increase in rate of ages, will effect on development and improvement of the c...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'roads'' or 'road's'?
Suggestion: roads'; road's
...governments should work on building new roads infrastructure, to facilitate the trans...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20845070423 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5826393067 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2375313922 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.071428571 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319892284382 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109209907629 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923187580346 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209462578067 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734105946812 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.