Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, due to the rising on living standards, wants and needs of people are increasing gradually.These wants and needs bring about desire in better welfare level resulting sometime unhappines or less satisfying. I am of the opinion that in a rapidly changing world, people today are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, working hard and burden of too many responsibilities cause enormous amount of stress on people today.However, in the past, there were less people in the business world and sources of stress were also less than now. Additionaly, not only work but also living in tall buildings in big cities, technological devices, noise, traffic are causes of stress.These factors produce dissatisfaction and negative feeling on people.For example, if i struggle with too much traffic in the morning , i have negative mood all day. On the other hand, stress also cause deppression and threaten people health.Many researches indicate that stress has a negative impact on human body and lead to some diseases.
Second point is that, the popularity of social life has increased recently.People live more active and try to reach higher level of living standars. Furthermore, many people have started using social media so everyday they see each others high standard lifestyles.They want to reach exaggerated and unrealistic lifestyles that only a few group of people have in real world.Thus, when they are not be able to reach those standards they become unhappy or if they have it, they want more. On the other hand, in the past people were living more modest life. For instance, children have fewer toys and game tools in the past but now there is increase in the number of parents that always do all the things their children want so this is creating unsatisfied and unhappy people.
To sum up, rapid changes in the world have lead unsatisfaction inevitably.People have problems to cope with stress and they are becoming more materialist while they lived more modest life in the past.According to my opinion, when they find ways for controlling the factors that cause unsatistaction and unhappines, they will be happier in the future.Otherwise, there will be more unhappy and unsatisfied people in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08527131783 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95366672006 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545219638243 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.9797873234 48.9658058833 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.8 100.406767564 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7 20.6045352989 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.45110844103 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282328117754 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13341962404 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110467563158 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186662866353 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822037006416 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 11.7677419355 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 58.1214874552 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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