The idea of having a single career is becoming an
old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have
several careers or ways of earning money and
further education will be something that continues
throughout life.
The greatest people who achieved more have the
common characteristics and it's their perseverance
towards their goal. They set an aim and walk towards
it despite the hardship. But in current trend, people
tend to evolve. They chose more than one career
to reach their goal in order to succeed without any
doubts. It is further assured by their masters degree.
Reasons for choosing more than one career are:
• To manage the competition
• To lift the family's burden
• To realize their dream
It is smart to pursue more than one career as the
world becomes competitive. It made even the inborn
talents difficult to set their feet. As the number
of graduates increasing gradually, the employment
decreases. In order to overcome this difficulty, it is
wiser to opt for the higher studies and be a unique one
in a crowd of undergraduates.
Most of the people prefer IT company even though
they are from other departments. Because of their
family situation, they have no other options. After
their family status is improved, they moved on to their
core companies to be what they wished to be.
While some of them choose more than one career to
realize their dream. The well known example is MS
Dhoni who is ticket collector in railway station at first
and now he is the best captain of all time in cricket
world. One should take risk to realize their dream
by picking out more than one career. They should be
calculative when to take risk so that their desire
comes true.
In the world of many opportunities, one should grab
a one to reach their goal. This essay discussed about
the way of new fashion by picking out more than
one career. In my opinion, it is not bad to have more
chances. So I concur with the statement.
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- The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. 73
- The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Computers are being used more and more in education.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion. 61
- The idea of having a single career is becoming anold fashioned one. The new fashion will be to haveseveral careers or ways of earning money andfurther education will be something that continuesthroughout life. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...re have the common characteristics and its their perseverance towards their goal....
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Line 21, column 30, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...duates. Most of the people prefer IT company even though they are from other depart...
^^^^^^^
Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...panies to be what they wished to be. While some of them choose more than one caree...
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Line 31, column 24, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risk realizing'.
Suggestion: risk realizing
...time in cricket world. One should take risk to realize their dream by picking out more than o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82467532468 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47679396575 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8538827351 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.38176352705 799% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156935565364 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485942359086 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547876605829 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398928563261 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569857621017 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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