Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health related issues. Some people believe the government should control population’s sugar intake while others think people themselves should be responsible for their sugar eating habits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Despite the detrimental effects of consuming sugar excessively, the amount of sugar used by people is rising. While it is believed by some that the government should control the usage of sugar, others argue that people themselves, should be in charge of changing their habit of sugar consumption. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and explain my support for the latter view.
Some people argue that the government has an undeniably important role in sugar intake reduction by controlling the amount of sugar in food products and publicizing less intake of sugar. Firstly, the government can impose higher taxes on sugar-rich products and allocate subsidies for products that use healthy alternatives of sugar, leading to a rise in the costs of sugar products, which in turn causes a decline in sugar consumption. Secondly, the detriments of abundant sugar intake can be publicized by government, tackling the problem in family level.
However, some disagree and believe that people have a central role in altering their habits of sugar eating. It is obviously clear that nobody is more prone to the risks of high levels of sugar intakes than oneself. Although, diabetes and obesity impose great expenses on governments, but it is the sick person and his family who suffer the most. Thus, everyone should take the necessary measures to lower their sugar consumption, decreasing the costs spent on healthcare. For instance, children can be thought from early ages to have healthy eating habits. Moreover, publicity of less sugar intake is aimed to make people aware of the dangers of unhealthy sugar intake habits and to encourage them to reduce their sugar intake.
To conclude, although the government has an important role, I believe that the onus is on people to change their sugar consumption habits, which would lead to a healthier society and a great decrease in money spent on healthcare system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11501597444 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67248147103 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536741214058 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.592100111 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50242180061 0.244688304435 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184402987241 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111317101113 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325982291144 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893328569482 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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