Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of the main responsibilities of governments is to allocate budget to different organizations and activities. They should prioritize the organizations and support each of them in terms of vitality. Whether governments should spend the same amount of money on the arts as they spend on athletics or not, has always aroused controversy among society. In my opinion athletics are as important as arts and should have similar amount of support. There are numerous reasons why I have this opinion and I will explore a few of the most important ones here.
For one thing, an undeniable fact is that the arts and athletics both are representatives of a countries development. These two are the media where a country can express it's ability and progression. Olympics games are not only chances for athlets to show their skills but also are opportunities for countries to show their achievements. When a countries football team wins the olymipic football match, it shows that the country has has the best organization, management, financial support, and development to achieve that success. So, athletics and art are of equal importance and should gain equal support.
Furthermore, art in somehow a mental exercise while athletics are physical exercise and our lives without each of them will not be secure. That is because people need both mental and physical health to be able to work and achieve success. Allocating the same amount of money to these two fields means that we emphasize on both equally, especially today that people have almost forgotten the importance of exercise and healthcare. A study has shown that although healthcare technology has improved and people have new methods of curing duseases, people's life expectancy today has decreased compared with the people who lived hundreds of years ago without any technology. The possible explanation might be the fact that people have more sedentary lives and less physical activity today. Therefore, governments' support for athletics can be helpful to some extent.
Overall, of cource the arts is important because it shows thoughts and beliefs of the people in a country and needs support. however, I can not admit that it should have more support than athletics. Without any reservation, athletics are required to ensure a countries healthcare and welfare.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ion, athletics are required to ensure a countries healthcare and welfare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, for one thing, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20588235294 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91020764387 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508021390374 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1460055508 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.473684211 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221740679972 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787066619115 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713686080342 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15083582238 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574083960432 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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