In your apartment building there is an entrance hall which you share with your neighbours. Recently there have been some problems with this shared area. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
introduce yourself and describe the problem or problems
suggest what could be done to improve the situation
suggest a meeting to talk about it
Dear Neighbors,
I am Sen Gupta, resides near the entrance hall area which is common for everyone. I have some concerns regarding the entrance hall which is shared by all the neighbors. In the past couple of weeks I have observed that people use the entrance hall to put their leftovers. These leftovers are creating foulsmell in the whole entrance hall and in the houses near the hall. It has become very difficult for most of us to walk in this area.
I would like to suggest some ways by which we can get rid of these leftovers. I discussed this situation with the house keeping committee, they are willing to take care of the leftovers. They can collect everyone's leftover from their apartment. All we need to do is to pay them some amount monthly .
It would be great If we can have a meeting on this issue as soon as possible. In this meeting, we can have everyone's opinion to resolve this issue or we can go by the suggestion I have shared in this letter.
Looking forward to hear from all the neighbors.
Best Wishes,
Malvika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...to do is to pay them some amount monthly . It would be great If we can have a m...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ared in this letter. Looking forward to hear from all the neighbors. Best Wishes,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56613756614 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44104446107 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2478464383 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3846153846 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170758903449 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590721806323 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525032514601 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859632633519 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631997279576 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.