Some people prefer to Shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online.

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Some people prefer to Shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online.

Submitted by Chawdaraj on Sun, 07/14/2019 - 02:12

Large supermarket have recently introduced online grocery shopping. While many shoppers do their food shopping online, many still tend to prefer shopping the traditional way by visiting the supermarket. This essay will discuss why online food shopping has its benefits but why traditional food shopping is ultimately superior.
Online food shopping is certainly an effective way to complete what many people consider to be a laborious chore. A person can simply click-through a website and have food delivered with in very short time to one's door. As an example, a major supermarket in Australia promise a three-hour turnaround time on grocery delivery being able to shop online saves busy people the unnecessary hassle of having to visit a supermarket.
But not everyone needs to save time and visiting a supermarket can in fact be an extremely positive experience. Walking through the aisles allows one to choose from a vast array of different products and to decide exactly what goes into the shopping basket. For example, think about the variety of vegetables available at a supermarket. It is enjoyable selecting the best avocado from the pile. It goes without saying the supermarket shopping, if you have the time, can be a pleasurable experience.
With the introduction of online food shopping, traditional routines are being challenged. This essay discussed why online shopping can be extremely efficient process but why shopping at the supermarket in person can be such a pleasurable experience. In my opinion, visiting the supermarket offer a superior experience to online shopping.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while, for example, in fact, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01442112086 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551587301587 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8336854549 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242840798197 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832622890257 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999172425641 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159980530014 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110238996933 0.056905535591 194% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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