Your neighbors have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter:
– describe the problem with the dog
– explain why it is important for you to sleep
– outline what your neighbors could do about the situation.
Dear Rakesh,
I am writing this letter to complain about your dog Bruno,who is quiet noisy at night,ultimately affects my sleep.
To start with, from last few days I have observed that there is something wrong with Bruno. He starts barking suddenly in the night and cannot sleep.this noise has affected my sleep.
As you know that I work for a digital marketing company and I have my office to attend at 09.00AM Sharp.
I have to get up early at 06.00AM , make breakfast and lunch for my kids before I leave for the work.I need to have a sound sleep during the weekdays. If there is any change in my schedule, I would not be able to get up early.
you have always been a kind neighbor and helped everyone in the vicinity.Its important that you help me resolve this problem, by concerning a veterinarian across the street.He has a great experience of treating dogs.
I hope you will look into this matter as soon as possible
Yours Sincerely
Pankaj Khubchandani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...for my kids before I leave for the work.I need to have a sound sleep during the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, you know, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71511627907 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65688534328 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697674418605 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9876435735 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.375 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320746637587 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115701742706 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817849384652 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131691966116 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910926270538 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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