Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. Do you agree or disagree?
Every criminal should not be held in jail, however, many of them should be permitted to serve the community is thought by a significant number of individuals. I agree with the notion, as it will help the community to finish unattended jobs and adolescent criminals can prove themselves.
Community jobs by prisoners will benefit society and teach a lesson to the lawbreakers. Many criminals can easily do small jobs in the society such as painting and cleaning, therefore the authority should provide them with tasks to do in the community instead of keeping them inside the jail. Which in return help the municipality also to finish various pending tasks. For instance, in Indian prisons, the short term offenders have to work with the jail authority to support the construction and hygiene jobs.
In addition to that, Criminals are not born lawbreakers some become because of bad circumstance such as, juvenile offenders are not mature enough to decide the wrong and right practices in society, hence, such individuals deserve another chance to prove themselves by allowing them to work in the community tasks. For instance, according to the Indian penal code of law and order, the juvenile criminal is offered to do community services during their jail term to help them in becoming a more social animal.
In conclusion, the opportunity to work for the community will provide some offenders with a good chance to improve within as well as small jobs can be done to support the government without spending money on them. I believe that these notions can improve the culture of prisons within the society in the near future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nstead of keeping them inside the jail. Which in return help the municipality also to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0295202952 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68379100668 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523985239852 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4277721397 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.3 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265982161098 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097055854853 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664632651106 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161710721038 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401999613046 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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