Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people are of the opinion that newspapers cannot be replaced with the internet as the major source of news. this essay does not agree with this position, and the following paragraphs will demonstrate two important reasons for this.
First, it is evident that the internet has become the primary platform for publishing news nowadays. this can be exemplified by the fact that the majority of newspapers have their online news versions in order to cater for their readers who prefer to spend their time online. Besides, the internet has converted into a dynamic news environment, which makes it possible to feed and update news in real time, and to share opinions about the news has never been easier than in the era of the worldwide web.
Another popular viewpoint is that the internet will definitely continue to be the main news source in the years to come. this is because online news portals provide a merely infinite variety and amount of news in all spheres of life in all languages, from politics and economy to technology and sports, which no conventional newspaper could offer. Lastly, the efficiency of internet news can hardly be over-estimated because of the instant and oftentimes free access to information at any given time, which makes the internet dominant over any other types of media.
Summing up the above points, it is clear that newspapers can no longer compete with the internet as the source of news nowadays because modern technological means have created convenient and easy access to news updates for people around the world.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-06 | Bakhtiyar1 | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-06 | Bakhtiyar1 | 11 | view |
| 2019-11-24 | catngan | 78 | view |
| 2019-11-24 | catngan | 78 | view |
| 2019-08-18 | Hira Shaheen | 84 | view |
- These days children are surrounded by electronic devices such as personal computers tablet computers and smart phones and they learn to use them at a very early age What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation Give reasons for your answer a 84
- some people believe that it is good to do multiple jobs,while others believe that it is better to focus on one job?Do you agree or disagree?I 61
- some people believe that it is good to do multiple jobs,while others believe that it is better to focus on one job?Do you agree or disagree?I 61
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...e internet as the major source of news. this essay does not agree with this position...
^^^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... platform for publishing news nowadays. this can be exemplified by the fact that the...
^^^^
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... main news source in the years to come. this is because online news portals provide ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00383141762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55704001415 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2605500793 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.111111111 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283563236732 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131664115957 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538075411768 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183084696448 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00909590919662 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.