In some countries, children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
From ancient times humans have put tremendous efforts to be civilized and for which certain conduct codes and manners are maintained till today. When its comes to child behaviorial guidelines countries follow different approaches as a result few nations believe in children freedom whereas some apply strict rules on them. In this essay, i will discuss both aspects and at last, in conclusion, i will share my own fair opinion.
To start with, many undevloped nations do not belive in principle of child freedom and it could be related to their financial and social condititons. On Financial basis in such countries tecnhological advancements are very poor or null due to this people dont come out from backward thinking. Moreover traditionally and ritually part of countries dont give liverage to their kids and it can also be connected to religions also for instance of stirict muslim nations.
On the other hand, developed countries believe in overall freedom for their each and every citizens and children are vital part of it. These nations dont interupt their children thinking and avoid any tough rules imposement because as per them youngones are foundation of nation they should be nutured freely.
European and Western countries are great examples of it because they dont believe in stereoypes nations and want to put their kids in some sort of cages or bars and Such thinking is great bone for youngsters.
To sum up, various countries follow different set of rules and implement on children and it bring negative and positive output accordingly. According to me, there should be balance in freedom and strictness on children because over implication of both could lead to dangerous results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, as a result, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14028776978 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68592331395 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.4518899011 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23160085558 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812493432353 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579441540249 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125909549457 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512705163541 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.