about streamer
in many country, live stream already became an activity that you can earn for living, but in my country it just raised about 3 or 4 year ago. So the potential of live stream is very huge. A streamer ( not a famous one) can earn about a thousand dollars a month , an impressive number that can bring you a very easy live.
but in the other hand, live stream and the streamer is making the economy of my country down. they don't have to pay the tax because no one can static how much money they earn in a month or a year. Beside the advertising contract, stream can earn the money from fan due to the donate system.Moreover, the streamer often use bad words , smoke cigarettes. it can affect children and teenagers the major fan of them.
I hope the government will publish the law to make the streamer become an official job. Thank you for reading haha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37106918239 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38858440134 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6104806361 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2222222222 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204391853547 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754003069325 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077190726492 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129929046664 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400454225137 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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