some people opinion that its better way to accept the bad situation like unsatisfactory in jobs and lack of money, while other believe that better to try and improve the situation. Discuss both the views an d give your own opinion.
In contemporary world inhabitants are dissatisfaction because of economic condition. According to some people opinion that best way to tackle the worse condition like problems with employment and poverty is to admit them. While others point of view contradicts to make strive to improve such happening. In this essay we will discuss both the views of optimist and pessimist toward betterment of conditions. However, my vote goes in favor of trying hard to achieve something.
Some public opine that acceptance of current situation is better way to handle problem. Because if one could not do anything to change it would drive towards many other difficulties. For example developing profession in field that is not having interest in it. hence could not secure more appealing one because of not having expertise. eventually, leads to many problems like frustration, stress and anxiety. Therefore, instead of tensions about employment and other economic situation its better to admit. In recent report by Down news showed that people with poor jobs and money issues are more stressed and heart attack rate increased in such people are 15% higher than other.
On the other side people who believe on struggle and hard work have contradictory point of view. In their believe despite fact that situation is not favorable, instead of only sprawl and wait for favorable time is not good approach. The opportunities are for them who hunt for it and effort is prerequisite for it. For instance noble literate Marie Curie who won two noble prize belong from very humble background. She made many sacrifices and hard work in his journey to achieve it.
This essay discussed both the approaches to encounter worst situation by accepting or struggling for its betterment.In conclusion I favor the effort and hard work which if could not assist in one condition but would inordinately escalate the other.
- the graph below shows the average carbon dioxide emission per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summaries the information by reporting main features and make comparison where possible. 73
- creative artist should always freedom about what they want to do.there shold be no government restriction over them what they want to do.to what extend do you agree or not. 78
- some people perfer same thing in whole life but other perfer change dicuss both the point and give your opinine, 78
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorologycollects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to producereliable forecasts.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shownbelow. 56
- The chart below gives the information about USA marriages and divorce rate between 1970 to 2000 and marital status of young adults in two of the years. summaries the main information by reporting main features and make comparison where possible. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mployment and poverty is to admit them. While others point of view contradicts to mak...
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...uation is better way to handle problem. Because if one could not do anything to change ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14935064935 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76504455872 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8393531988 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272082055954 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740593880373 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629909549531 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155045440074 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647884058318 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.