The diagrams illustrate the process of building an igloo
The process below illustrates several steps to construct an igloo.
Overall, it is clear that the diagrams have 13 stages which begin with cutting hard-packed snow and finish by making some holes in the wall.
At the first step, hard-packed snow is cut by snow saw to form the large blocks at the base. Next, the edges of these blocks, which like cubes, are smoothed to build the base which has a round shape. At the sixth stage, the walls are dug to create a hole to make an entrance for the igloo and a block is slightly large for the last opening on top. At the eighth stage, snow is packed by the spade into all crevices or gaps between these blocks.
Then, the inside of igloo is smoothed by hand. At two final steps, the igloo is covered with snow blocks from above the hole and some holes are cut for ventilation from inside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35897435897 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06617192017 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1238207337 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194449128804 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959514232381 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124459503669 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154538792514 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148595420858 0.0819641961636 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.