You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time however; you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine.
- explain what you like about the cafeteria
- say what is wrong
- suggest how it could be improved.
Dear Editor,
I would like to bring in your magazine's notice few concerns with regards to our college cafeteria which certainly need some improvements at the earliest.
First of all, I want to start with positives of cafeteria as it give variety of items on decent rates which is quite rarely expected from a college canteen. Also staff is very friendly with students due to which bonding between them is amazing.
On the contrast, I have observed from past one month, food freshness has been lost and it could be due to the usage of cheap ingredients or cafeteria owners are serving left over food and in both cases it is not a healthy sign. Apart from this, students numbers are increasing day by day but there are not enough sitting arrangements for them which is must need on urgent basis.
As a solution, I would like to suggest, please send your representatives as a costumers on random basis to check their food standards and take strict actions so if things are not found up to the mark.
Yours sincerely,
Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Editor, I would like to bring in your magazines ...
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Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...need some improvements at the earliest. First of all, I want to start with posit...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...rarely expected from a college canteen. Also staff is very friendly with students du...
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Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hem which is must need on urgent basis. As a solution, I would like to suggest, ...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a costumer' or simply 'costumers'?
Suggestion: a costumer; costumers
...st, please send your representatives as a costumers on random basis to check their food sta...
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...found up to the mark. Yours sincerely, Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, apart from, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67403314917 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54370544882 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67955801105 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7267764822 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 4.34317383033 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142470488467 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598699942011 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508090673356 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850631065547 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550596950549 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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