Some believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degree. Do you agree or disagree ?
Some people assert that give equal wages to manual workers and top qualified people. There is a healthy discussion and argument on this but I don't agree in this matter.
Since educated people spend years on studying and researching, they play the vital role in a company's development. Companies have professionals that specialize in particular areas like marketing, accounting and finance, legal, global development, etc. In order to get effective in their role people spend years to study and research on these particular areas. Despite studying and gaining knowledge, these people have should become creative and adaptive according to the situation. The highly skilled or top-level employees get paid really well because of their unique intelligence or quality which is rare. For example, a director of an accounting firm is skilful during the harsh times of how to handle expenses when the company does not have enough cash inflows and for those reasons he receives good salary. Because of some of these qualities he owns, a person becomes more valuable. Highly qualified people are usually very focused, smart, informative, optimistic, extroverts and have constant crave for learning all their life.
Whereas, people doing physical work are usually the uneducated ones. On the one hand they work really hard for the firm in doing all the physically challenged works, but on the other hand, their contribution to the firm's growth is minimal. For instance, if a company goes bankrupt because of its dues unpaid or a company's sales dip due to ineffective marketing plans, these class of workers are of no help in such scenarios. Their contribution to the company is of only physical help like lifting goods from one place to another or managing and sorting the stock in warehouses or transporting. Thus, they are not given wages as good as those who are actually significant to the rise of an empire in the market. Also they don't have to constantly adapt and think according to the changing circumstances. They just have one role to play all their working life.
In conclusion, I would reiterate that we can't ignore manual labourers since they are important to some extent too, but the real heroes of an enterprise are the skilled unique people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08625336927 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69827072737 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56064690027 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8420873026 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204108086237 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063892718543 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567356211702 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995406336387 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497566775847 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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