Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Economic progress has been the major concern of governments among most of the nations while other others debate that balanced development is a must for a country. This essay delves both the aspects and will forward the concrete opinion.
Firstly, overall development of a nation rests on the economic status of the country and vice versa. However, the development approach with balanced overall management of different sectors can be a sustainable way-out. The development of the fundamental sectors such as education, communication, transportation and ensuring food security can help improve the living standards of the citizens thereby addressing their felt needs and lead to develop the economy of a nation. We can take the example of developed nations, with leading global economy, are focusing continuously on improvement and safeguarding the rights of every individual. Needlessly to say, overall development is a key driver to the economic upliftment.
On the other hand, nations with the prior goal to boost up economy can be too analyzed in both aspects. It depends on the present economic status and the adopted approach to development. In case of developed nations with major developments has already reached a point assuring a quality life to its citizens can focus solely on improving the economy whereas the case is not same with developing and under-developed nations. In addition to that, economic development of a nation does not always assure a high satisfaction level and contributes less to the happiness index. A similar case of one of the global economic leader, North Korea, can we be sure about the quality of life of its citizen, who are devoid of the basic facilities like freedom and are inaccessible to the outer world.
To sum up, overall development is a key driver to the economic prosperity of any nation and the approach to prosperity should address the needs of the citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, whereas, while, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19677419355 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97943174575 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7879207705 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.923076923 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0915963637121 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422304021998 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544044283934 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078888945163 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811868467113 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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