In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invention of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology?
Inventions have been playing a huge role for society in the past 100 years. They have helped society to overcome various barriers. These were thought once to be pretty hard to accomplish. But thanks the human being noodling, antibiotics, airplanes, and computers came to be the differentiation in people's lives.
First of all, with the advancement of medicine, antibiotics have helped to lessen people's painful. They were tested and proved to be very efficient against many ailments. Without them, everyone would still be suffering with maladies.
Moreover, another huge inventions are the airplanes. They are one of the most safer and faster way of transportation. With them, it is possible to stay in touch and even work overseas. Many entrepeneurs even have many particular airplanes to make swift transactions, for example, to travel among states or among countries to have works done by leaps and bones.
However, in my opinion, the best inventions made by man are the computers. They auxiliate us at work. For instance, scientists use them for measurements. They program computers to realize thousands of tasks in a couple of minutes. And, what is more, computers also help us to work abroad. There are some specific softwares in computer which guide us to use foreigners computers.
Finally, not only have computers been making an astonishing inputs for us, but they will also keep contributing in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
... are the airplanes. They are one of the most safer and faster way of transportation. With ...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'input'?
Suggestion: input
...ve computers been making an astonishing inputs for us, but they will also keep contrib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18695652174 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89847427435 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639130434783 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7791026787 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2777777778 104.977214359 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7777777778 20.9669160288 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203578077552 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604075464446 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797129064899 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101177651285 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556022680027 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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