Agree or disagree: News sources in the past were more concerned about the accuracy of the news compared to the news sources today.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
... our ancestors used smoke to send news. Also its accuracy of transferred informati...
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...estors used smoke to send news. Also its accuracy of transferred information wer...
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...moke to send news. Also its accuracy of transferred information were vital for p...
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...ere vital for people living in that time . Since then up to now new ways had been ...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...o now new ways had been invented such as news papers, telephone, TV etc. Hence, t...
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...ore reliable, while others believe that todays news sources are more valid than before...
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...et and use it for looking up information they need from different sites and news ...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
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...from different sites and news is one of those information. Every famous news broadcast has a web...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ws broadcast has a website which release not only first hand news but also has li...
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...so has live stream. Moreover, many other local, NGOs and so on, have news statio...
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...over, many other local, NGOs and so on, have news stations which broad cats news...
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...use lost its validation. In addition, some times, even trusted news sources s...
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...ation. In addition, some times, even trusted news sources start broad casting...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are many sources'?
Suggestion: there are many sources
...asting propaganda. However, out there, there is many sources to receive news and stop them from sen...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...urces to receive news and stop them from sending out false or exaggerated news pr...
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.... For example, my friend read an article from an online website , which uncovered...
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... read an article from an online website , which uncovered that one of parties lie...
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...eased that. To make long story short, news broad casting mediums aim is to be ...
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Suggestion: Also,
...ms aim is to be known as a trusted one. Also they want to be the main source even ot...
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... As far as I am concerned, internet has a an important role here which is made i...
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... As far as I am concerned, internet has a an important role here which is made it e...
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...s a an important role here which is made it easy for all people around the world ...
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Suggestion: Also,
... world to access different news source. Also made it more competitive for news med...
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...ld to access different news source. Also made it more competitive for news mediu...
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... Also made it more competitive for news medium provide news and produce news pro...
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Line 7, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...m provide news and produce news programs more accurately that past time.
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...uce news programs more accurately that past time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2351.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81762295082 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36165836594 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553278688525 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1472561443 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4230769231 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415582197941 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125241437653 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101846341776 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295145553171 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453219241373 0.0645574589148 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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