You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear John,
How are you feeling now? I am writing this letter to inform that we had played against South Africa last Sunday and our team won the game of cricket, and Sunny your brother received an award Player of the tournament.
At the morning hours, it starts raining for some minutes and that helps us in bowling and field, especially spinners to have variations which help them to bowl out the complete team on 105 scores only. At the later hours, it was a bright sunny day and we chased the score in 15 overs only without losing a wicket.
I am happy and excited as a caption after winning the maiden trophy for the team. Everyone is feeling wonderful after winning the game and also missed you badly. This winning has boosted our confidence for the upcoming tournament against West Indies. I hope you will recover soon and ready to be part of the next tour.
Get well soon my friend.
Best wishes,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, How are you feeling now? I am writing th...
^^^
Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Get well soon my friend. Best wishes, Vishal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56626506024 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14139468582 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710843373494 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6858442179 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183273678042 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569545424906 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535534953981 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999147386237 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802623794723 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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