The illustrations show how chocolate is produced
The process of making chocolate is illustrated in the diagram. There are 10 steps of producing chocolate, and it is divided into the farming, distributing, and manufacturing process, starting from growing the cacao trees to pressing the part of cocoa beans.
Moving to a more detailed analysis, the ripe pods of cacao grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia are harvested from the trees, and the white cocoa beans inside the pods are taken to be fermented. After the fermentation, the beans are dried by spreading them in the sun. the dry cocoa beans are subsequently moved to the large sacks and distributed to the factory by train or lorry.
Arriving at the factory, the harvested beans are roasted in the hot temperature around 350 C. the roasted beans are taken to crusher in order to remove the outer shell, remaining the inner part. Eventually, the inner part of cocoa beans are pressed, and the chocolate liquid is produced as the finished good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Indonesia are harvested from the trees, and the white cocoa beans inside the pod...
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Suggestion: The
...are dried by spreading them in the sun. the dry cocoa beans are subsequently moved ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90797546012 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68864286988 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1826951275 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105191260338 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584387209839 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900983601172 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801926896885 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667883733257 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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