nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for company or organisation. Why this is the case? What could be disadvantages for it.
In this contemporary world employment rate decreased because of more dependence on machines. In current scenario general inclination toward own business preferred by many, rather then, utilize expertise and energy for others. In this essay firstly, a huge amount of profit people get is major driving force and Secondly, recession in economy have debilitating repercussion on business.
Although; there are multitude of benefits of self-employment but most appealing is earning from business. Because a small investment may turned into colossal marginal profit obtained. However, the things like time, energy and persistence required higher then employment hence its effects are unprecedented. For Example, Apple company started their business with only 2 million dollars but now this company is leading in electronic gadgets with 267 billion Dollars endorsement. therefore people execute with honesty and accomplishment because of personal investment.
On the other side there is jeo-paradise involve with business with almost 50% chance. the primarily disadvantage is economic situation of country have impact which directly shifted to owner business. When country economy turn down its difficult for self-employed to sustain their margins and sometimes they have to decrease in gain. During financial crises in France Nike lower the prices of their products and got lose of 200 billion Dollars. If self-employment could not managed through proper strategies then own might be at risk of bankruptcy.
In this essay we discussed that main attraction of having self employment is amount of profit obtained, but some times due to poor government policies, business might causes more danger then profit. However, with better policies this could be minimized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tilize expertise and energy for others. In this essay firstly, a huge amount of pr...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ost appealing is earning from business. Because a small investment may turned into colo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ossal marginal profit obtained. However, the things like time, energy and persist...
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Message: Did you mean 'higher than'?
Suggestion: higher than
...e time, energy and persistence required higher then employment hence its effects are unprec...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... energy and persistence required higher then employment hence its effects are unprec...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...s with 267 billion Dollars endorsement. therefore people execute with honesty and accompl...
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Suggestion: therefore,
...s with 267 billion Dollars endorsement. therefore people execute with honesty and accompl...
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...e with business with almost 50% chance. the primarily disadvantage is economic situ...
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...ts and got lose of 200 billion Dollars. If self-employment could not managed throu...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'manage'
Suggestion: manage
...n Dollars. If self-employment could not managed through proper strategies then own migh...
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...cies, business might causes more danger then profit. However, with better policies t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69961977186 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91985502291 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67680608365 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4819590117 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176685605347 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546318849734 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476536971111 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106445382962 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00726351666647 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.