Some people think that advances in technology are beneficial for worker. Other say it is a disadvantage. Discuss and give you own opinion.
With the progression of technology, it has some positive aspects towards employees and workers of industries, while some hold the perception that it has adverse effects on workers. This essay will discuss both the arguments following with my opinion.
On the one hand, the high tech technologies have played a vital role in many industries. Worker were abused with high demanding physical works but due to technology it makes easier for worker to perform less physical work such as different kind of machines can lift the heavy weight parts in aerospace industries. Moreover, it is also helpful for employees to complete their work task in short time of period. Computers are the best example of the efficient work in small span of time. In excel, millions of calculation could be done with in the minutes that was only possible with hand calculation 2 decades ago.
On the other hand, with the advantages, there are seveal disadvantages associated with gadget and modern era machine. It seems that robot and artificial technology has taken place in every sectors. These machines are working more effectively than the human, so many companies investing the money on it. Therefore worker are facing potential job insecurity. Addition to that, the value of human being in business sectors is decreasing day by day because many jobs are done by machine that has some negative consequences in the society.
In conclusion, brighter side of technology is that worker do not need to perform tough jobs which causes physical and mental stress. However, it has some drawbacks because many worker has lost their jobs due to robots. I personally believe that these technologies have significantly negative impact on worker because if all jobs is done by machine then worker would not able to earn money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...different kind of machines can lift the heavy weight parts in aerospace industries. Moreover...
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Suggestion:
...d, with the advantages, there are seveal disadvantages associated with gadget and...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...ny companies investing the money on it. Therefore worker are facing potential job insecur...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun worker seems to be countable; consider using: 'many workers'.
Suggestion: many workers
... However, it has some drawbacks because many worker has lost their jobs due to robots. I pe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en worker would not able to earn money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, in short, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09459459459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69342156419 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7839582566 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155739789694 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050738111261 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335394912031 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985632730303 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274949985207 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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