Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, the scenario has been changed as compared to the past time. At this time education institutes not only focus on study but, they try to learn their students about life tendency as well as various aspects of life and how to become helpful in human society. Some section of society believes that free community service should be mandatory part of secondary school education. So, this essay will discuss some contradictory view before reaching to appropriate conclusion.
To begin, with the current trend students has to learn important thing from their student life. They can be learn by their parents and school tutor. At this time school gives knowledge to students about charity work and how to develop better neighborhood around them and teach to other children who are with them. However, by make it compulsory it would be good for the children development also good for their understanding. If they will learn from small age then one day he or she will be a good member of society. To illustrate, in the country Japan it is compulsory for every school that they have to do any social work with their student.
On the other hand, it should not be a compulsory for every one. It is also matter of interest. By making it compulsory it would not good enough. It can also do impact on study so, whenever students get a free time from their study schedule they can do this kind of social work as leisure activity. Moreover, after the high school study students have to select their career path according to their interest so some time they can distract by the social work.
To recapitulate, it is much beneficial for high school students that they learn moral values with study. If they will learn about humanity then they spread positiveness around them. So after all it is good for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat they learn moral values with study. If they will learn about humanity then the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, after all, as to, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78274760383 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48545462935 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511182108626 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2694266327 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196675375276 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073410475768 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713124581024 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124917142461 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290962479653 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.