Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Communicative skills are of great importance to the career success of leaders.
it is never easy to lead, no matter for a leader in a company or of a country. they have to possess various abilities and skills to do the job well. some people claim that communicative skills are the most important quality that is required for a successful leader. From my perspective, I cannot agree it more. Indeed, how well they can communicate with people plays a key role in their career. my reasons and examples are given below.
In the first place, smooth communication makes it easy and efficient for leaders to do their jobs. As is known to all, the primary job of a leader is to arrange his employees well and maximize their potentials. Equipped with incredible communicative skills, a leader can make others understand his intensions very well and carry out his plans as quickly as possible. Otherwise, a big amount of time and energy will be wasted in endless communications and explanations. For example, my father is the manager of a big company. Albeit extremely busy at work, he is still able to strike a perfect balance between work and life, thanks to his excellent ability to communicate.
In addition, leaders can always get emotional support because of their wonderful communicative skills. As a proverb goes, language is power. To some extent, how well a person talks determines the extent of his or her popularity. The law especially applies to leaders. Taking American president election as an example, why those candidates pay so much attention to speeches and debates on media. it is because the use of language is a major part of a leader’s charisma and a speech or debate is their great opportunity to present their talent in communication, and voters mostly favor those with better communicative skills.
Admittedly, I am not denying the importance of some other qualities that a leader should have, such as time management ability, teamwork spirit and coordinating skills. However, all these qualities above are relatively minor factors if compared with communicative skills, play a fundamental role in a leader’s career, because every single other ability cannot do without the communicative skills.
To sum up, good communicative skills mean a lot to a leader. it is not only because they can bring a higher working efficiency, but also they can make a leader favorable and popular.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, well, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03092783505 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9939402788 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574742268041 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.791886502 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7272727273 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181651611048 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05144369685 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535307442007 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103433475427 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535930207455 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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